Friday 5th of October. Oh for @*!& sake!

Work achieved
Sketches branching into high fantasy, more colony ship setting, etc.

Created a new story introduction.
Focused on the idea of Chop Suey
 
........Failed to take photos of the sketches that now hang on my walls for this blog entry AND now only have a physical copy of my introduction to the chop suey graphic novel. 

Did not achieve 12 hours of extra work outside of class. Pretty sure of this.

Le sigh- This week could have gone better. Being sick didn't help. Having my computer delete my copy of chop suey doesn't help. Not having images of my sketches doesn't help...And this was the week that caused me to abandon the video game... Board games are still in but my focus isn't on that. This absurdest graphic novel which should give me both a narrative and artistic freedom to toss in whatever I find interesting in the moment is.

Here let me instead post what passes for a proposal draft for chop suey instead.

Patrick Holloway
Proposal v0.1
(subject matter is…subject to sudden changes at a moments notice)

Hello and welcome! You will soon be holding in your hands a copy of
“Chop Suey- the graphic novel”
Chop Suey is an illustrated adventure through the bizarre, ironic, and amusing tales
of the recently departed. It begins with someone unfortunate enough to board and
depart Charon’s riverboat. Being swept along by various circumstances he finally
arrives at The Last Table. An absurdly large open aired food cart run by Death itself!
My intention is to sweep the reader along through the personal musings and stories
of Deaths patrons. I believe it will provide me a wonderful framework to twist the
story to whatever suits my current taste. By framing my story as the final meal at
the end of life I can touch on countless themes, be it regret, true wisdom, the things
that bring us together and, of course death.
And the entire thing will be strange! I plan to leverage and splice together many
bizarre elements that I have been exposed to. Chop Suey is a dish made out of the
combination of various leftovers a chef has towards the end of a shift. Much like
that dish, I will be leveraging many interests of mine and hopefully serve something
wonderful from the concoction. Where else will you find a fully armored samurai
sitting down and delicately enjoy a crème brulee?
The core framework of Chop Suey comes from my personal travels. Let explain
using my most recent and expansive. Chop Suey owes its heart to Shanghai.
Having spent 8 weeks in china I couldn’t help but be influenced by the life I lived
in Shanghai. I met and befriended strangers with unique stories and lives. Unique
lives such as Jeremiah Kiplagat of Kenya to “bubble” from Datong, China. I ventured
forth and explored the night markets and their tantalizing food vendors. Savoring
everything from the wonderful kebabs to an adventurous experience with a
scorpion. This idea of arriving someplace and sharing in these little moments is
a wonderful one. I think this project needs to be executed simply because of the
moments I experienced and the stories that are born from them. I feel that they have
a weight to them that can help broaden your view of the world at large. Toss in the
absurd humor death would surely bring to the experience and there you have it.
Of course I cannot have death be a character in my novel without 1 st paying tribute
to the wonderful author Terry Pratchett and the wonderfully strange and classic
film the Seventh Seal by Ingmar Bergman. Bergman created a personification of
death that was a present character in the film. Death proved to have a dark sense of
humor, was crafty and imposing without motion. (He was also a master of chess!)
This was a movie that broke the mold and made death someone who could be
spoken with. To be pleaded with. To say things needed to be said in the narrative
from a unique perspective. Death in the seventh seal was so much more alive
than just a skull in a cloak that reaps a lot. Terry Pratchett in turn took the death
personified from Bergman and made him absolutely hilarious. He also made
death the hero of the diskworld. Death did his job but was such an understanding
character that you can’t help but support him as he does his job. So I undoubtedly
will owe Pratchett a paycheck or at least a heart felt thanks for his interpretation of
ends specter.
But that is a worry for another day. And while any fan of the diskworld novels will
likely enjoy what I am attempting to create. It is designed to be open to anyone who
enjoys the absurd and the poignant. May you soon dig in and enjoy.

("Pressure pushing down on me
Pressing down on you no man ask for
Under pressure - that burns a building down
Splits a family in two
Puts people on streets"-Queen)